Take a Look?

by Theresa-Mary Mc Glinchey
24th January 2017

Hey,

I have finally uploaded my first piece onto this website and I was just thinking that it would be great is anyone would mind taking a look at it and leaving some feedback?

The story can be found in two parts here: https://www.writersandartists.co.uk/profile/theresa-mary-mc-glinchey/myworks

A little fore-warning, the story is not all that great, I know. It was written for a school project and I just thought that I would see what other people thought of it.

I know that it is long, but I really would appreciate if anyone could just spare the time and let me know what you think of it.

Thanks

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Thanks Wilhelmina! I'll definitely take a look at those other projects!

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Theresa-Mary
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Theresa-Mary Mc Glinchey
26/01/2017

Hi, Theresa-Mary!

I'm in a rush, will try to read your work when I have more time.

If you want to write for your own enjoyment but don't have a lot of time, may I suggest the following projects? (Added attraction: you'll be benefitting others with little effort.)

https://www.writersandartists.co.uk/question/view/2644 (additional ground rules and links to what's already been written at https://www.writersandartists.co.uk/question/view/2645) We could use some "young blood" to keep us from getting TOO degenerate!

http://la-granota.com/stranger.htm (the StrangerInAStrangeLand project: flash fiction about and for refugees)

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Wilhelmina Lyre
25/01/2017

Thank you so much Saima! I really appreciate it! :)

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Speculative Fiction
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Theresa-Mary Mc Glinchey
25/01/2017