The Unobservant Traveller

by Dan Lucey
14th August 2014

Hi all!

I've recently finished writing and editing a travel memoir, which I will soon be submitting for publication. The opening has been posted in the 'Shared Works' section.

This is my first time sharing work on this website and I would appreciate any constructive criticism ... I guess my question is: can you please read it and let me know your thoughts.

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