Hello,
I am worried that I am using 'the' to much in my story, is this possible? I just don't know what other word I can use when I am describing something. Such as, "the rain was falling heavy" " the engine roared" " the clock ticked" etc...
Is it bad to use 'the' a lot?
Thanks..
Hi Catherine and all,
I just found master edit as a downloaded its £17.00 but I find it very good. lots of demos on youtube before you buy.
http://masteredit.net/wordpress/
Just got it, Love it....
Hi Catherine. Aimee Salter has some amazing editing tips here ...
http://www.aimeelsalter.com/2013/09/self-editing-seek-destroy-word-list-1.html
There are six parts to this series ... so far ... this link is for the first one.
I hope they help
Thank you. Your answer was very helpful, I will try changing some words around.