A SHORT ONE PLZ SPARE SOME TIME TO READ AND LEAVE YOUR PRECIOUS FEEDBACK AS INTERACTION ONLY CAN HELP US ALL HONE OUR SKILLS IN A BETTER AND QUICKER WAY.
THANK YOU.
A SHORT ONE PLZ SPARE SOME TIME TO READ AND LEAVE YOUR PRECIOUS FEEDBACK AS INTERACTION ONLY CAN HELP US ALL HONE OUR SKILLS IN A BETTER AND QUICKER WAY.
THANK YOU.
I struggled to make any sese of your poem.
Might I suggest you invest in a copy of,
The Making Of A Poem - A Norton Anthology of Poetic Forms - by Pullitzer Prize winning poet Mark Strand, and Eavan Boland, poet, and professor of English at Stanford University.
I hope that helps.
It would be better if you didn't type that all in caps and not use a little text speak, since it does give the impression this is what the poem is written like.