When dark is too dark

by Amanda Paquin
9th January 2014

Hey guys,

I was just wondering... how much is too much when it comes to writing dark fiction ?

Do you think that there would be a point where the reader would just put the book down, because the story is just too depressing ?

Or must you add some sort of relief for yourself and the reader ?

Can the whole story, from beginning to end be tragic ?

(sorry asking too many questions....)

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Amanda

For almost 30 years I tried to write my autobiography but it was very 'dark' as you put it. It took me that long to see why I wanted to write it and question whether or not it would serve any 'good' purpose for readers or myself. This was the clincher for me; it would serve no good purpose.

I ended up writing a philosophy / motivational / self help book.

I don't read dark books now no matter the shade or how happy the ending.

Hope this helps

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Barry Hines' 'A Kestrel For A Knave' (Kes) was pretty depressing but seemed to do well. I never read another of his novels, though.

Personally, unremitting gloom is something I can comfortably do without - get enough of that in real life. I want a novel to be uplifting in some way, not make me want to dig out the Prozac.

It's a big, fat NO from me ;)

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Jonathan Hopkins
09/01/2014

I recently read one of the darkest/depressing books ever. But it was amazing!

Forbidden by Tabitha Suzuma. Literally from start to finish it is depressing as hell! And is about a brother and sister falling in love. Very dark!

However, it's been published by Random House ;) (The writing is literally flawless though).

So don't feel too bad that your book is dark!

Debbie x

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