'On The Banks Of River' Nature Around Poetic Lines

by neelam gaur
7th July 2020

             'On The Banks Of River'

          

                 We sat together

                 to share hours laughter

                 & in tears were

                 few unpleasent memories

                 it's moved forward

                 by looking ahead

                 having a new optimistic vision,

                  we painted  on sand

                 regarding themes of past too

                 filled with happiness ,sorrow,

                  &  joyous creations & colors

                  during it she sometimes

                  seems like a genuine friend

                  too genius & enough clever,

                  in a moment looks like

                  a teacher & a guide

                  but as a real human

                  always being felt

                   like a protective shadow

                   standing behind me

                   on the banks of river,

                   When sounds of waterfall

                   that flowing over the edge of steep

                   in grooves & cliffs of mountain

                   to fall in river below

                    it asumed

                    like want to make realized its presence

                    & awakening voice to show,

                    truely these were lively moments

                    as were teaching about life

                     & for real endearing behavior

                     which encrusted by

                     natural protective shell

                     to face enduring hard circumstances

                     on the banks of river.

                                                               Neelam G

                     

                      

                 

                  

                

                    

 

 

 

            

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05/04/2020

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24/02/2020

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