Trapped Both Ways:Fidelis Amicus Gravis

by Tejinder Dhiman
14th April 2014

I shouldn't have done it. It can't have ended this way. The problem is that I just don't understand, why. Maybe, if I told you, you would understand - maybe you could help me to understand it. But whatever you do, please don't judge me after all that I have been through. Well if thats cleared, then I should start.

My name is Fidelis Amicus Gravis and this is my story:

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Gr8,work Sis!,hope I see the rest of the story soon!...

-From your little Sis

-Ishpreet-

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Ishpreet Dhiman
01/01/2015

Thanx Tony

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Tejinder Dhiman
20/04/2014

Yes, Tejinder. Very gripping start. Tense, brief, leaving a lot to the imagination, with the reader craving more.

Tony

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