Dogs of War

by Mark J Braybrook
1st August 2014

Hi Everybody, I'm going to submit my short story Dogs of War to a competition and wondered if anyone had any more constructive feedback on it. You have given me great feedback previously and helped me to improve it tremendously, and I now want to give it the optimum chance of sucess. Any further assistance would be greatly appreciated.

Many thanks

Mark

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Hi Carmelita, link:

https://www.writers-online.co.uk/Writing-Competitions/

Sadly we can only post the one short story here so I will gather as much feedback to Dogs of War before I enter it into a competition and then I will post something fresh!

Best regards

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Mark J Braybrook
05/08/2014

Hi Mark, yes I'd love the link you mentioned and best of luck. Do post some more short stories. Looking forward to reading more of your work. Kind regards.

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04/08/2014

Hi Carmelita, thank you so much for your kind and positive words. It's a real compliment to say that it was not complicated and was easy to follow. I've tried for many years to make my stories as easy to read as possible and to use the right words to get the story across.

I was going to enter it into the Writing Magazine's website competition. They are always running competitions so well worth checking out. Let me know if you need a link to them.

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