Hi Everybody,
Yesterday I decided that my prose was too prosaic and needed stirring up. I wrote a short piece by a technique that is perhaps best described as directed free association. This has potential pitfalls, of course. The associations that I select may have little of no general validity but be peculiar to me.
I've posted it in the shared works section, and I would be very interested in others' opinions of it. It's called 'Vision', and it's less than 500 words!
All the best
Penny
I like it, follows quite whimsically even with/apart from those 2 jagged endings......