Title

by Victoria Whithear
11th July 2012

I'm changing the title of my first book... again, and I wondered if anyone else is having this problem. I have a series and I'm not trying to make the titles match exactly, but this one I'm changing stuck out like a sore thumb as so different to the others that it just had to go. Trouble is, I have no idea what to replace it with. Do you use working titles? Do you stick to the original title or do you change it as you go?

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There just needs to be a title on it when I send it. It doesn't have to be that good, just something.

Oh, and Mark, there are several balcony scenes! Not usually involving Juliet, sadly. But I do have a scene where her name is discussed. Her mother says she was named after the Bard's Juliet (because her father had changed his mind about Portia) and her sister (also with a Shakesperian name - Bianca) laughs and says only indirectly. Juliet was given her name because her father was listening to Dire Straits on the way to the registry office. Ha ha ha!

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13/07/2012

Or you could do like Murakami with his 19Q4 trilogy )19Q4 Book One, 19Q4 Book Two, 19Q4 Book Three).

:-)

To be honest I wonder how much influence a modern author has over the title of a book. It seems to be so key from a marketing perspective that I can imagine a lot of collaborative effort and much discussion would go into it, to ensure it is an effective sales tool.

I only use rough titles myself and am flexible as to what a final title would be. The title never fixes the story in my mind when I write so I don't need it as a guideline.

However if you feel that you need an appropriate title while you work, and if a wrong title is proving a distraction, then I could imagine it could be something you would prefer to settle early in the process.

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Victoria,

From the description you've put, and without knowing what other titles you have, I immediately thought of the title "Peter and Juliet". See if you can sneak a balcony scene in! Too obvious? Yes. Cheesy? Probably....

But I know what you mean about series titles. I am missing a title for my fourth 'series' book and it's like a gaping wound in my imagination. I have heard of publishers changing titles but I suppose a book will need a catchy title to catch a publisher's attention in the first place...

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