The first sentance of a book is the most important. Well recently I was horrified to learn that mine was 'clunky'. Does anyone have any ideas on how to (pardon the phrase) 'declunkify' my work? I want to make sure my first sentance flows, its something I've always had trouble with? Can anyone give me any pointers?
Seriously though. Perhaps you could copy the sentence here so we can read it and offer suggestions. Hard to answer when you can't read what you are trying to declunkify.
Sentence.
:-)