The Visit submissions

by Carla Devereux
22nd March 2014

Although not selected as one of the finalists, I'm happy to share my submission. I've posted it on my website http://cadasilva.com/news.html

Feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you

Carla

Replies

I really enjoyed your story, Carla. It was so raw and emotional, almost like poetry I could feel your pain when reading it and the confusion of a small child. It was like I'd read an extract from a book I'd bought from WHSmith.

Keep up the good work!

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