Although not selected as one of the finalists, I'm happy to share my submission. I've posted it on my website http://cadasilva.com/news.html
Feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Thank you
Carla
Although not selected as one of the finalists, I'm happy to share my submission. I've posted it on my website http://cadasilva.com/news.html
Feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Thank you
Carla
I thought your story was extremely engaging. Thanks for sharing it. I agree with the previous comment about the final paragraph - you don´t need it. I´ll let you know if I become brave enough to post mine!
I would love to read the other submissions. If anyone posts their story please let me know where I can access it to read it. We can learn so much from one another.
Writing is an art perfected by practice and constructive feedback.
Please share your work
Thank you
Carla
Hi Carla, like the story, packed with emotion and well crafted. I have just started writing and this is my first attempt at a competition, I have a lot to learn. I'm not skilled in literary
criticism but I know what I like and I enjoyed reading your story, thank you for sharing. I would like to share mine some time when I'm not so shy.
Well done.
Best wishes.
James.